Yikes. I never thought I'd do it, since I'm really spooked about showing these to anyone. Never shown these to anyone before. Anyway, here's some lyrics or "poetry".
Ideas, critique etc. is very welcome, since I think It's the only way to get better. And no, these are not about my life, although some bits here and there are. Please tell me if I wrote something wrong.
Human condition:
the shadows under your eyes
do their best
but cannot hide
the shadows behind your eyes
I found myself alone
where were you last night
my friend
I cannot keep you
or make you stay
the house is empty
the bed cold
the windows are broken
yet someone is here
breathing in the dark
truth
or what is left
of it
is always
in the shadows
behind your eyes
and mine.
"lyrics/poetry"
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"lyrics/poetry"
Wild spirit of the Eagle, Black hawk, bird of prey design
Blush
pupils dialate
capillaries flushed
with blood
touch carries
electricity
after all this time
time
It's still nice
to know
you open your
coffin of words
air escapes
from your lips
touch
after all this time
all
hair falls
on my chest
like the rain
outside
inside I'm warm
It's still nice to know
that after all this
time
I can
still make you
blush.
pupils dialate
capillaries flushed
with blood
touch carries
electricity
after all this time
time
It's still nice
to know
you open your
coffin of words
air escapes
from your lips
touch
after all this time
all
hair falls
on my chest
like the rain
outside
inside I'm warm
It's still nice to know
that after all this
time
I can
still make you
blush.
Wild spirit of the Eagle, Black hawk, bird of prey design
this is the latest song we are working on.
DANISH CURLING TEAM.
these cheetos make your
white shirt orange
chillin on the couch
with no pants on
downhill skiing
watch me peeing
allover ya face
look out the window
does that girl have pants?
jorts! those be jorts!
she loves water sports.
DANISH CURLING TEAM.
these cheetos make your
white shirt orange
chillin on the couch
with no pants on
downhill skiing
watch me peeing
allover ya face
look out the window
does that girl have pants?
jorts! those be jorts!
she loves water sports.
dots wrote:incesticide
one i have in the works for next practice is called
TOUCHDOWN MACHINE
HOPE
for this community
for this town
for this city
HOME
where we are
where we live
where we want to be
LETS GO BUFF A LO
DISPAIR
at the end of the year
hope can be mean
touchdown machine
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the term (touchdown machine) was the name i gave James Hardy when i drafted him back in 2008 on my fantasy team. i told everyone in the basement he was going to be a touchdown machine and be this amazing player that the bills needed.
3 years later i think he has 5 or 6 catches total in 3 years.
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TOUCHDOWN MACHINE
HOPE
for this community
for this town
for this city
HOME
where we are
where we live
where we want to be
LETS GO BUFF A LO
DISPAIR
at the end of the year
hope can be mean
touchdown machine
----------------------------------
the term (touchdown machine) was the name i gave James Hardy when i drafted him back in 2008 on my fantasy team. i told everyone in the basement he was going to be a touchdown machine and be this amazing player that the bills needed.
3 years later i think he has 5 or 6 catches total in 3 years.
[youtube][/youtube]
dots wrote:incesticide