"lyrics/poetry"
Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:43 pm
Yikes. I never thought I'd do it, since I'm really spooked about showing these to anyone. Never shown these to anyone before. Anyway, here's some lyrics or "poetry".
Ideas, critique etc. is very welcome, since I think It's the only way to get better. And no, these are not about my life, although some bits here and there are. Please tell me if I wrote something wrong.
Human condition:
the shadows under your eyes
do their best
but cannot hide
the shadows behind your eyes
I found myself alone
where were you last night
my friend
I cannot keep you
or make you stay
the house is empty
the bed cold
the windows are broken
yet someone is here
breathing in the dark
truth
or what is left
of it
is always
in the shadows
behind your eyes
and mine.
Ideas, critique etc. is very welcome, since I think It's the only way to get better. And no, these are not about my life, although some bits here and there are. Please tell me if I wrote something wrong.
Human condition:
the shadows under your eyes
do their best
but cannot hide
the shadows behind your eyes
I found myself alone
where were you last night
my friend
I cannot keep you
or make you stay
the house is empty
the bed cold
the windows are broken
yet someone is here
breathing in the dark
truth
or what is left
of it
is always
in the shadows
behind your eyes
and mine.