so, i wrote this song that gets stuck in my head.

gaybear · Post by **gaybear** » Wed Jan 18, 2012 6:12 am

the recording is crap, because it's just me yelling at the computer without any lyrics, but you can get the drift
http://bestnetworx.com/uploader/files/1 ... g%2026.mp3

Pens · Post by **Pens** » Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:14 pm

Is that a tremolo effect? If so, I like the song but I'd rather hear it with a less intense depth on the trem effect. I wanna hear the guitar. Right now it sounds like an accordian.

gaybear · Post by **gaybear** » Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:54 pm

no tremolo. maybe it's cause the strumming is staccato and the internal lappy mic is being overdriven?

Pens · Post by **Pens** » Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:58 pm

Yeah, I guess that's it. The staccato thing makes it sound like an accordian, or a polka song. I'd like to hear it strummed normally? I really like the vocal melody.

gaybear · Post by **gaybear** » Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:46 pm

it's more of a piano-type part on guitar. it sounds nice in person.
if i made it more open strummy, i'd probably change the time signature to 6/8
i'm glad you like the melody, cause that's my favorite part, too